Homework 17 February 2020.
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				Neville Briggs
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Homework 17 February 2020.
I turned the prompt around from poetry of sound to sound of poetry. 
SOUND OF POETRY
Sound of passion that burns
Sound of memories that last
Sound of life that is lived
Sound of time that goes past
Sound of singing not sung
Sound of tracks where we tread
Sound of words on a page
Sound of thoughts not quite said.
			
													SOUND OF POETRY
Sound of passion that burns
Sound of memories that last
Sound of life that is lived
Sound of time that goes past
Sound of singing not sung
Sound of tracks where we tread
Sound of words on a page
Sound of thoughts not quite said.
					Last edited by Neville Briggs on Mon Feb 03, 2020 7:00 pm, edited 1 time in total.
									
			
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" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: Homework 17 February 2020.
Oooh yes, Neville - absolutely nailed it!!
			
									
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Re: Homework 17 February 2020.
Totally agree Neville - original and thought provoking!
			
									
									
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Re: Homework 17 February 2020.
Thanks Shelley, thanks Catherine for your kind feedback.
			
									
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Re: Homework 17 February 2020.
Nothing is set in concrete and people are more than welcome to change the prompts around a bit to suit their writing - I do it all the time as well.  I love what you have done here Neville and changing the prompt around worked well in this piece.  I agree with Shelley
			
									
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Re: Homework 17 February 2020.
Thanks Maureen.  
			
									
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