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Post by **DinkyDi** » Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:24 pm

Thanks again,

Maureen, that's adds another air to it again? Looks cool.

And Nev, yeah I felt the lines beginning with "and" instead of "it's" helped to round the stanzas out if you like even though I didn't separate the stanzas.

And thanks for taking the time to read Sue.

Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Tue Aug 30, 2011 4:46 pm

Now Maureen I know you can do better than that. I was thinking of some rolling clouds like the ones that come in accross the Nullabour.

Bob

Post by **DinkyDi** » Tue Aug 30, 2011 5:10 pm

Animation! Now that would be cool.

Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Tue Aug 30, 2011 6:07 pm

If it can be done Adam Maureen can do it.

Bob

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Tue Aug 30, 2011 6:11 pm

Oh I'm sure it could be done but not by me - nice to think you blokes thought I could do it though and wish I could...sorry...way out of my league

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