Homework 25.4.
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Homework 25.4.
THE KING OF SWING
I didn't have a TV or iPad,
the DIY and park were all I had.
A hardwood plank, suspended on two chains
was seating for a super swooping plane.
Push off the ground, and soar into the sky
as feet rise up to tread the clouds and fly.
My plane flew faster, higher than the rest;
in winged imaginations I was best,
and bolder still, while standing on the seat
all earth would sway and dip beneath my feet.
In just the briefest warp of time and space
apotheosis seemed to charge the place.
I didn't have a TV or iPad,
the DIY and park were all I had.
A hardwood plank, suspended on two chains
was seating for a super swooping plane.
Push off the ground, and soar into the sky
as feet rise up to tread the clouds and fly.
My plane flew faster, higher than the rest;
in winged imaginations I was best,
and bolder still, while standing on the seat
all earth would sway and dip beneath my feet.
In just the briefest warp of time and space
apotheosis seemed to charge the place.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: Homework 25.4.
Ah yes - who hasn't flown to the stars on a childhood swing!!
Enjoyed this one, Nev.
Cheers, Shelley
Enjoyed this one, Nev.
Cheers, Shelley
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Re: Homework 25.4.
Swing low sweet chariot - our swings opened our imaginations for many things when we were kids - you took a different tangent, top marks for thinking outside the square Neville - well done.
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Re: Homework 25.4.
Thanks Shelley, Maureen. 

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Re: Homework 25.4.
I can not understand half those big words Nev ?
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Google is your friend Bob - or Funk an Wagnells 

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Re: Homework 25.4.
Thanks Heather.
There are no big words for poets Bob, only the best words in the best order.
There are no big words for poets Bob, only the best words in the best order.

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Re: Homework 25.4.
G/day Neville
Nothing like slipping back to those carefree childhood days,
when with a little imagination a swing can launch you into, space or anywhere else for that matter.
Terry
Nothing like slipping back to those carefree childhood days,
when with a little imagination a swing can launch you into, space or anywhere else for that matter.
Terry
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Re: Homework 25.4.
You really thought outside the box for this one Neville and I love it. I still can't resist the joys of a swing even today, and was on one just two weeks ago on the beach in Phuket!