The real chicken coop incident 2009

[Bob Pacey]

A potent brew I can vouch for after 14 years in the vehicle reapair industry Marty. Have not read the original and this seems a little straight to the point. I think with a bit of poetic tickle up it would make a true but entertaining yarn or poem.

Cheers Bob Bet you spent some time in the dog house for that.

[Neville Briggs]

I think they put that stuff in the cheap plonk at Woolies. better keep it away from the chickens.

[Heather]

Thanks for the laugh Marty.

Heather

[warooa]

As much as the original 'chicken coop incident' was funny, I agree with Bob, that with a bit of a touch-up this would make a funny little cracker.

Cheers, Marty (the other one . . who doesn't make an art form out of 'chicken expiry')

[Bob Pacey]

Go on marty have a go at sprucing it up

Bob

[Bob Pacey]

Some ideas chooks scraping their bums on the ground or a turbo fired up rooster

Bob

[warooa]

It's about right as is, Marty . . . maybe just tighten up the metre a bit - and at a dozen lines it's one you can memorize quickly and belt out at the next Laggan Pub session.

[Heather]

I love it too Marty and agree with nice Marty that it just needs a tweek here and there. Let us see it when you have (please).