The Gun

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Re: The Gun

Post by Bob Pacey » Sat Jul 16, 2011 5:51 pm

I'm a big fan of shearin poems as you know Marty.

Good yarn well written and would go well performed.

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Re: The Gun

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Jul 18, 2011 6:48 pm

"A coupla years is all I have before I call it quits
I'll be buggered if I'll lose a run to any upstart shits


Marty I've been reading this and trying to get the pace correct to add to the excitement if it were performed.

The above line seems out of place ( Just my opinion ) Perhaps a slight change to something like

before I have to quit.
to any upstart shit !!!


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Re: The Gun

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Jul 18, 2011 9:13 pm

Mate i would be honoured to have this one in my kit bag.

Will be a bit harder to learn then The Mare but I'll give it a go with your permission.

Learning two others at the monent so might take a while.

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warooa

Re: The Gun

Post by warooa » Tue Jul 19, 2011 2:58 am

That's a good'un Marty, and one to be proud of - especially as the shearing boys give it the thumbs up.

ps. not the same without a stray angle grinder or some radiator coolant though :twisted:

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