Hard Times

[Hully]

One for the GFC MkII

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[Neville Briggs]

G'day Hully. I had a listen. I really enjoyed it.
I thought you had good strong sentences in there, plenty of punch, plenty of vivid expression and the use of the image of the old radio ties it together really well, I think.
Bakelite..I can remember that stuff, one of the first types of plastic for homewares.

[Hully]

Thanks Neville,
just been having a site-surf and surprised you even found time to listen given your ongoing conversations on rhyme and meter.....!!
Oh well, all makes for interesting thinking doesnt it?

h

[william williams]

Thank You Hully You Have Done It Justice Those Were The Days

[Terry]

Excellent Hully, I really enjoyed that. I just love the musical backing that's come into vogue now, it greatly enhances a poem I reckon.

Terry