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Neville Briggs
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Ball Boys

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Aug 29, 2011 8:54 am

BALL BOYS


By tackles of cruelness the players are falling
and out of the big stand I hear the crowd calling.
They live in the hope that their highly paid bruisers,
touch the ball down as the winners; not losers.
Through gaps in defenders and dodging their clawing
struggles the halfback; he's over ! he's scoring !!
And louder than thunder ( but nothing like singing )
the cheers of supporters are roaring and ringing.


(apologies to Henry Kendall )
Neville
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Maureen K Clifford
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Re: Ball Boys

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Aug 29, 2011 9:07 am

Fabulous Neville I love it and not a bell bird to be heard :lol: You are a clever man

He breaks through the line – strong legs pumping with power
and throws himself over on grass damp from showers
then raises his head with a grin, hears the singing
of applause and cheering inside his ears ringing.



cheers

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Re: Ball Boys

Post by mummsie » Mon Aug 29, 2011 2:29 pm

Good one Neville, Fun :lol:
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.

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Re: Ball Boys

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Aug 29, 2011 2:40 pm

Thanks Maureen and Sue.
Neville
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Re: Ball Boys

Post by Heather » Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:20 pm

A fun poem Neville. Enjoyed it.

Heather :)

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Re: Ball Boys

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Aug 29, 2011 3:29 pm

NEVILLE thats football and you got it in a nutshell.


Well done mate. Sorry about the Knight though.


Bob

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