Homwork week ending 10/10/2011 Redemption - Fromelles 1916

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Re: Homwork week ending 10/10/2011 Redemption - Fromelles 19

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Sep 26, 2011 3:56 pm

Love the repetition Marty it reinforces and ties it all together nicely - you have written this beautifully and first cab of the rank again. Well done.

Have to say it gives me a buzz to know how you sit there at your computer waiting for me to put up those prompts so that you can avidly devour, digest and then divulge your words and share with the world- makes me feel special somehow :lol: :lol: :lol: :P

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Re: Homwork week ending 10/10/2011 Redemption - Fromelles 19

Post by mummsie » Mon Sep 26, 2011 5:14 pm

BRILLIANT MARTY


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Re: Homwork week ending 10/10/2011 Redemption - Fromelles 19

Post by Heather » Mon Sep 26, 2011 6:01 pm

Good one Marty! :D
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Re: Homwork week ending 10/10/2011 Redemption - Fromelles 19

Post by Wendy Seddon » Tue Sep 27, 2011 4:48 pm

Nice, Marty.
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Re: Homwork week ending 10/10/2011 Redemption - Fromelles 19

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:39 pm

Brilliant, Good One and Nice Marty, are you girls talking about the same bloke. ?????

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Re: Homwork week ending 10/10/2011 Redemption - Fromelles 19

Post by Heather » Tue Sep 27, 2011 5:42 pm

The poem Bob, the poem. :roll:
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