RENEWAL - a renga

[Kym]

Did you hear something Heather???

[Kym]

Maureen, just read your "renga" again. It's very peaceful and pretty. I like it. I also hadn't heard the word "soughs" before, so that's my one thing I learned for the day.

K.

[Heather]

Bob, just as haiku is not for you, performing is not for everyone either....

There, do you feel better now?

Love the poem Maureen. I reckon it would be hard on the back though the old pole dancing!

[Bob Pacey]

Zat vould depend on who ze Pole vas ?????


Bugger have not been in the cornor for a while.


I reckon Maureen could do well at performance she has the gift of the gab.


Bob

[Maureen K Clifford]

I've got the gift of a lot of things Bob

Too much Pole dancing when young equates to many pain killers when old.
Swedes give better massages. I dig Swedes.


Should have bought shares in Ibuprofen when I was younger I think - can't even mow at the moment Lawn is taking on the appearance of an urban jungle - Ellyssa is not impressed.

[Neville Briggs]

[quote="Maureen K Clifford"]

Thinking outside the square - not hidebound by convention - game to try new things save incest and folkdancing

Someone has said that poets are by nature rebels and non-conformists.

Good on you Maureen. I must admit that I am not a great fan of Japanse poetry, I don't think it transmutes successfully into English, but I enjoyed your brief look at something different.

[Maureen K Clifford]

thank you Neville - glad you enjoyed my foray into the cherry blossoms and away from the bush my first venture was a year ago and like the bush it has called me back many times

http://pool.abc.net.au/media/pink-cherry-blossom-rain

Cheers

Maureen