So here it is.....
Zondrae King (Corrimal) 12/11
Now Maureen’s been giving us fodder for pens
and enough of her own poems to wallpaper dens
so lets all get busy before this weeks end
and write her a poem and then quickly press ‘send’.
I haven’t begun yet to buy Christmas cheer
and I’m late with my shopping the same as last year.
I’m lucky I don’t have a mate who loves grog
I haven’t bought wine or beer or eggnog.
But the tree is now standing and dressed up just right
and the lights on the patio are the highlight
of a walk down the street. All the neighbours admire
the three ropes of colour and white ones up higher.
But neary a present is yet to be seen
and I have no idea what you buy for a teen.
And as for my hubbie, I haven’t a clue
and the weather’s turned cold as if it’s on cue.
But lunch has been sorted – about who brings what
and we know where to gather, we’ve chosen the spot.
So before I forget or before others do
I’ll jump in right now- Merry Christmas to you.
So here it is.....
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Good one Zondrae.
Very good.
Since this is a workshop, I'll be picky..line one of stanza 4, did you mean " nary "
I know what you mean about buying for teens, I just give them a gift voucher. I thought that was a bit lacking in style but I found out they preferred those things.


Very good.
Since this is a workshop, I'll be picky..line one of stanza 4, did you mean " nary "

I know what you mean about buying for teens, I just give them a gift voucher. I thought that was a bit lacking in style but I found out they preferred those things.

Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.