Swings and Roundabouts

[Hully]

Thankyou all for your kind words - I do need to spend more time polishing these things before I post - its amazing how glaring an error becomes once it is in a poublic forum ! !

Zondrae, out of curiosity, what bothered you initially? - (without stating the obvious imperfections in meter)?? - Not rhyming couplets, I know, but it would be good to know if that form raises obstacles for the reader?

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[Mal McLean]

Well that's the trouble with poublic forums, Hully.

[Hully]

Hi Mal - I dont have that view - I think it is the strength of public forums....if you can't get feedback, why have them at all??

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[Mal McLean]

Sorry Hully mate....I was only having a joke about the spelling of the the word "poublic" . Thus, that's the trouble with poublic forums...........eerrrr, an intended joke falling flat.

Regards

Mal

[Hully]

ha - missed that ! ! - but my spelling is atrocious and I probably wouldnt have noticed it anyway.

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