Homework w/e 7/5/12

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Homework w/e 7/5/12

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:10 am

Talking with Girls.jpg
TALKING WITH GIRLS

I feel really worried, I feel really scared,
Mum said that to-night we must talk to the girls;
those creatures with dresses and sort of long haired.
My legs are gone wobbly, like I'm getting scared.
I talk to the dog, but that hasn't prepared
my voice for those girls, with their ribbons and curls.
I'll try not to shake, I'll pretend I'm not scared,
'cause there's no escape, we must talk with the girls.
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Re: Homework w/e 7/5/12

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:30 pm

Well you seem to have got over that phobia Neville :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: Obviously didn't last too long ;) Mind you talking to the dog would have been safer :P

Great to see you giving it a shot Neville - isn't it amazing the different concepts we get from one picture... I must do something for it myself

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Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:54 pm

Thanks Maureen. Did I say it was autobiographical ;) :) real men don't talk to girls...they listen :lol:
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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Apr 26, 2012 8:23 pm

I see you learn't that lesson well ;)
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Re: Homework w/e 7/5/12

Post by jakkimay » Fri Apr 27, 2012 8:55 am

Hahahahaha. Onya Nev. Good one.

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