Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

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Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Wendy Seddon » Thu Apr 26, 2012 3:24 pm

Ba-beep, dop dop, ta-shoosh shishwa -
it’s Bulba calling Fray,
A terrible mistake’s been made
and some-one’s got to pay!
I’m sitting here, kerpish ter-clonk,
with Ambleton and Voo,
you’ve put us in an awful fix
so now it’s up to you.
Ta-plink, wendup, ooshamto kong,
beam us back to space,
Some-one’s messed up our disguise
we’re really out of place!

The info gained on earthlings is
I must say, out of date!
Poor Ambleton looks puzzled as
wee Voo frets on his fate.
The beings here have longer hair
and never show their knees!
Take us to the mother-ship
I beg you Bulba, please!
They’re laughing, ishka minto blog,
and most of all at Voo -
‘cause humans haven’t dressed this way
since nineteen fifty two!
Wen de Rhymewriter There is nothing mundane about the ordinary.

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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Rimeriter » Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:01 pm

"Crikey".

I'm non plussed.

!!!! ?????
Jim.

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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:22 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: Dead give away you reckon Wendy - although retro is supposedly back - that's thinking outside the square - well done

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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Rimeriter » Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:53 pm

Ladies, obviously I must still be INSIDE the square.

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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Wendy Seddon » Thu Apr 26, 2012 4:57 pm

Ishko aswerp Jim...
All you need to do is waddlequash silly!
Wen de Rhymewriter There is nothing mundane about the ordinary.

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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Rimeriter » Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:08 pm

Indeed !!!!

Undoubtedly the jokes on me,
your little one is laughing.
I cannot make it rhyme you see,
SO, oskerbibble quashing.

?????

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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Neville Briggs » Thu Apr 26, 2012 5:50 pm

What would you know about 1952 Wendy. :lol: :lol:
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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Bob Pacey » Thu Apr 26, 2012 7:25 pm

About 1956 I reckon Wendy ???



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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Wendy Seddon » Fri Apr 27, 2012 8:41 am

Love you Nev...and Bob, it's 1958!!!!
But that didn't rhyme.
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Re: Homework ending 07/05/12 Help!

Post by Heather » Fri Apr 27, 2012 12:30 pm

Love it Wendy! :lol:

Heather :)

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