Homework 21/5/2012 Dreaming

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Neville Briggs
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Re: Homework 21/5/2012 Dreaming

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue May 08, 2012 8:55 am

That's a good one Marty. It's hard to explain but I think you are heading in the right direction towards a feel for poetry rather than just putting stories in verse. Maybe you have been reading some of that stuff you got from the secondhand book stall, it's having a good effect. ;)
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Re: Homework 21/5/2012 Dreaming

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue May 08, 2012 9:53 am

Right on Marty. :)
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Re: Homework 21/5/2012 Dreaming

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed May 09, 2012 8:19 pm

Don't sell yourself short Marty you do good work - I always enjoy your contributions and this one is no exception

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