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The Station

Post by SallyHopkins » Fri Jul 05, 2013 11:48 am

Good Morning all,
:D it is a beautiful sunny day in Dubbo today so I hope you are all seeing the sunshine as well.
Here is one of my poems that I would like to share with you. It is about my Grandfather William Hopkins and it's a bit sad but I hope you enjoy it and would love to hear what you think about it.



People coming and going at the railway station, busy on their way,
Gathering their bags and organising their goods after a long tiring day.

Rushing to get to their homes to be with their families at last,
People notice a little boy standing alone with his baby sister as they walk past.

He stands beside her in her basket, where she’s wrapped up tight,
But no mother around that anyone can see, no one in sight.

People walk by assuming their mum will soon be back,
But there they sit alone, by the railway track.

His sister screams for her mum and he comforts her as much as he can,
Her mother is what she wants, to find her is his plan.

The people scatter from the Station, and then the Station Master knows for sure,
They have been left by themselves and their mother is there no more.

The little boy only 3, knows his name is William but his sister’s he does not know,
He wears a coat many sizes too big, in it the name Hopkins which someone did sew.

He looks around in fear, waiting for his mother to be found,
“She said she be right back” he thought, but she’s nowhere around.

He is taken with his sister to a family’s place for the night,
He sleeps in a place that is unknown, certain he will see his mum in the morning light.

The morning comes but not his mum, people are talking and making plans,
He meets a lady who smiles and says “hello” and gently holds his hands.

“Would you like to come and stay with me for a while?”
What choice does he have, he’s scared but he manages a little smile.

He turns to get his sister but she is staying where she lay,
He tries to tell her he has to go, she doesn’t understand, what more can he say.

He never sees her again and feels guilty that he’d left her there,
He still wakes up in the middle of the night and wonders why his mum left that little pair.

The name Hopkins has stuck with him and his three generations so far,
Where it came from he’ll never know but he’ll always carry the scar.

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Re: The Station

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jul 05, 2013 3:29 pm

Wow what a great story - I have sent you a pm (Personal message) Sally

Cheers

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Re: The Station

Post by DollyDot » Fri Jul 05, 2013 3:34 pm

Hi Sally

What a lovely story - so touching! See Maureen has PM-ed you - She is the Queen of hope and salvation. My kind of poem.

Thanks for sharing!

Dot

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Re: The Station

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Fri Jul 05, 2013 7:21 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: Don't practise any religion these days Mate and gave the salvo's away a long time ago, but I always have hope ;)
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Re: The Station

Post by DollyDot » Fri Jul 05, 2013 7:39 pm

Maureen

I'm not talking about religion but about how you are always so willing to help those of us who flounder - you give us confidence and make us feel good and give us the confidence to keep on writing. Not that Sally needs that but some of us do and as well as that all that you do you do with a kind heart and in a happy way but for you some may have given up. I know I would have! So thanks Mate!

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Re: The Station

Post by warooa » Sat Jul 06, 2013 7:00 am

That's very touching and heartfelt, Sally.

Thanks for sharing it.

Marty

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Re: The Station

Post by SallyHopkins » Sat Jul 06, 2013 9:33 am

Thank you everyone for your comments and your advice I have been so nervous about letting people read my poems but you have made all my worries go away. I have a long way to go and I have had some wonderful advice so I feel like I'm on my way.

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Re: The Station

Post by Bob Pacey » Sat Jul 06, 2013 11:55 am

Some of the best poems come from life's experiences Sally, I'm a big fan of knowing where you came from before you can work out where you are going. This is a start .Is you grandad still alive ?

Cheers and thank you

Bob
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Re: The Station

Post by SallyHopkins » Mon Jul 08, 2013 12:05 pm

No he was killed when he was only 25 and left 6 kids. There are alot more stories to come!!

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Re: The Station

Post by DollyDot » Mon Jul 08, 2013 12:15 pm

Hi Sally

Such a pity but it sounds as if you have access to his stories. Looking forward to more poems!

Cheers

Dot

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