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Glenny Palmer
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QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Glenny Palmer » Sun Jul 14, 2013 11:19 am

At the risk of earning our esteemed webmaster's chagrin...........When the 'free verse' hullabaloo erupts, the following piece should offer some balance. I find this work quite delightful and very worthy of poetic validation. I like it very much, so I just want to share it. Hope you like it too. :D (and that the author forgives my enthusiasm in posting without permission...I dunno how to find her.)

‘‘Quiet Time’’
© 1989 Susan Lenzkes

What small daily doings –
and undoings –
loosen the laces of
faith’s shiny Sunday shoes? –
I remember learning to tie them –
so proud –
over and under, loop around
and pull tight,
practicing carefully
seeking smiles.
What works loose those
securely tugged knots of certainty
in one’s self and one’s perceptions?
And when we trip on our
trailing laces
and sit looking at their
frayed and soiled ends,
when we can’t keep it
all tied up anymore,
should we switch to loafers,
or walk on in Truth’s barefoot freedom?
The purpose of my life is to serve as a warning to others.

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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Neville Briggs » Sun Jul 14, 2013 3:48 pm

Love it Glenny. :) ( and of course it is not about shoes )
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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sun Jul 14, 2013 4:07 pm

Big tick from me as well - so not about the shoes
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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by keats » Sun Jul 14, 2013 6:33 pm

Got one 'bout thongs?

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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Jul 15, 2013 4:55 am

PHToooooo


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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Glenny Palmer » Mon Jul 15, 2013 8:39 am

...bless you, Bob....
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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Glenny Palmer » Mon Jul 15, 2013 8:42 am

...I thought you'd like it Matt... :P
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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Jul 15, 2013 8:48 am

keats wrote:Got one 'bout thongs?

That's a thought. Think of a thong as a thing for a theme.
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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Jul 15, 2013 9:10 am

Just remember thongs in Australia are different than thongs in America ?????


Thank You Glenny.

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Re: QUALITY Free Verse

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Jul 15, 2013 9:36 am

They are Bob but the shape is more or less the same - just that you won't get as many miles out the the US versions on our dirt roads - they're not cut out for the rough stuff :lol:
Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
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