The Jelly Bean Mine
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The Jelly Bean Mine
The Jelly Bean Mine
It's cold down there in the jelly bean mine.
It's cold and it's dark, and it isn't a joy,
But the men still go,
With a shovel and hoe,
For the pleasure of each little girl and boy.
It's wet down there in the jelly bean mine.
It's wet and it's dark, and the hours are long,
But the men don't shirk.
They will eagerly work
For a grandchild's smile, or a snatch of song.
I've been down there in the jelly bean mine.
I've stood in line with my barrow and pick.
I curse at my plight,
But I beam at the sight
Of a barrow of beans, and my heart beats quick.
If you go down to the jelly bean mine,
Remember you won't be there forever.
It's a long, hard track,
But you will look back
With a well-earned pride at your great endeavour.
Stephen Whiteside 01.03.2014
It's cold down there in the jelly bean mine.
It's cold and it's dark, and it isn't a joy,
But the men still go,
With a shovel and hoe,
For the pleasure of each little girl and boy.
It's wet down there in the jelly bean mine.
It's wet and it's dark, and the hours are long,
But the men don't shirk.
They will eagerly work
For a grandchild's smile, or a snatch of song.
I've been down there in the jelly bean mine.
I've stood in line with my barrow and pick.
I curse at my plight,
But I beam at the sight
Of a barrow of beans, and my heart beats quick.
If you go down to the jelly bean mine,
Remember you won't be there forever.
It's a long, hard track,
But you will look back
With a well-earned pride at your great endeavour.
Stephen Whiteside 01.03.2014
Stephen Whiteside, Australian Poet and Writer
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Re: The Jelly Bean Mine
Save the black ones for me
Mmmm and the red ones, and the white ones - you can have the green ones!

Mmmm and the red ones, and the white ones - you can have the green ones!

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Re: The Jelly Bean Mine
And to think I bought shares in the M&M mining. 

Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: The Jelly Bean Mine
I started this thinking it would be a poem for kids, but quickly realised it was actually a little reflection on the highs and lows of parenting.
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Re: The Jelly Bean Mine
As I started to read it I thought immediately of kids. Nicely done Stephen.
And I think the kids would enjoy it.
Wazza
And I think the kids would enjoy it.
Wazza
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OK. Thanks for that, Wazza.
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Re: The Jelly Bean Mine
I think you nailed it both ways Stephen, I enjoyed it and I have not long read it to my Six year old grandaughter who immediately gave it the thumbs up! (I think the jellybeans got her in straight away!)
Ron
Ron
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That's great news, Ron. Thanks!
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