What Should I write ?
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Your razor wire sample works fine David. I think. If you mean would it be accepted as bush poetry in a performance, I think it would go OK. In one of those writing comps probably not, because I see a lot of the conditions stated as " consistent metre " which I assume means regular or a repeated unvarying pattern throughout. This small sample appears to have rhyme pattern but irregular metre, so probably would be considered not the accepted form.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
Re: What Should I write ?
I'm very pleased to announce that today I have been writing! But, there's a catch. OMG, it doesn't have rhyme or metre. Is it a poem or an incoherent romp with words? - who cares. I'm writing. That's all that matters...
I'm off to see the wizard........
I'm off to see the wizard........

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Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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The bloody recliner is mine Heather and so are the beers in the fridge.
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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In the naughty corner I've got a full time spot in there.
Wonder ya let me get away with saying (the moderator has been forced to step in and edit this post)......... though. so I won't say it again.
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Wonder ya let me get away with saying (the moderator has been forced to step in and edit this post)......... though. so I won't say it again.
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After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Some serious abuse of moderators powers here.
That's it I have had enough !
Bogan Bob
That's it I have had enough !
Bogan Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!