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Contemplation

Post by alongtimegone » Sun Apr 20, 2014 9:06 pm

Contemplation

With seasons’ days long winter owned,
but on this evening summer cloned,
I strolled along a wind swept beach
where gentle waves just out of reach
tempted my sun warmed feet.

I wondered then, whence they had come,
marching to celestial drum
across cold depths of ocean floor
to kiss and then depart a shore
they’d journeyed far to greet.

What wild wind’s music tripped and danced,
to which rogue waves in heat, romanced
the sun by day, the moon by night,
as if with Gods they need unite
before they must retreat?

Did broken shell, sun bleached, lying,
long forgotten, naked, drying,
sleeping on an ancient sand
relive a life that once, though bland,
in dreams become so sweet?

I looked up to the strident cry
of gulls afloat in fading sky,
and watched the late sun’s rays bestow
their last gold blush on clouds below;
a masterpiece complete.

And as I felt the night’s approach;
its armies of the dark encroach.
I stood and thought on all He’d made,
while dancing foam on wave tops played;
unyielding, though effete.

In awe I turned my head to gaze
across the ocean’s misty haze,
as notions of forever time
bewitched me on this night sublime,
for just one moment fleet.

And so I set my steps to home
not feeling now so much alone,
but one with earth and wind and tide
where angels surely must abide
and earth and heaven meet

There on this lonely shadowed strand
of cooling beach and darkling sand,
I sensed a life in sea and shore
of here, of now, of long before,
a wonderment replete.

warooa

Re: Contemplation

Post by warooa » Mon Apr 21, 2014 6:51 am

Excellent Waz, that's really good, nice pattern and great use of some different words.

Goodonya, :)

Marty

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Re: Contemplation

Post by Rod Walford » Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:19 am

Hi Wazza - man this is brilliant! I really love it - real poetry that sings. I can see you and I have much in common when it comes to our contemplations. Thank you for this - it's inspirational !

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Re: Contemplation

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Apr 21, 2014 8:27 am

Goodonya Warren. We don't want to be like Henry's rouseabout who "didn't have any opinions, didn't have any ideers "
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

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Re: Contemplation

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Apr 21, 2014 6:46 pm

Good stuff Wazza ?

oh Nev I think that was Middletons Roustabout


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Re: Contemplation

Post by Terry » Mon Apr 21, 2014 9:13 pm

There's something special at times when you walk the beach, and it's always relaxing.

Nicely done Wazza.

Terry

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Re: Contemplation

Post by alongtimegone » Sun May 04, 2014 5:51 pm

Just realized I hadn't responded so Marty,Rod, Neville Bob and Terry ... thank you ...I really appreciated your positive comments.
Wazza

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Re: Contemplation

Post by Bob Pacey » Sun May 04, 2014 7:11 pm

Already wiped ya outa the will anyway Wazza.

Bob
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After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

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Re: Contemplation

Post by Heather » Sun May 04, 2014 8:09 pm

Lovely Wazza. There's some beautiful thoughts and images there.... truly contemplative.

Heather :)

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Re: Contemplation

Post by Terry » Fri May 09, 2014 6:29 pm

Hi Wazza,
There's something about the ocean that lends itself to poetry I reckon
and you have captured it well.

Cheers Terry

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