Homwwork 16/7/2014

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Homwwork 16/7/2014

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Jul 16, 2014 8:05 am

Initials

The carved initials in the tree
were meant to show your love for me.
Those happy days were so sublime
strolling with your hand in mine.

But that was then and this is now
ya stupid bloody great fat cow.
Cause now I wear a constant frown
you went and chopped the bastard down.

Bob ( LOL ) inspired Pacey
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Re: Homwwork 16/7/2014

Post by Heather » Wed Jul 16, 2014 8:36 am

That's progress for ya Bob! :lol:
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Re: Homwwork 16/7/2014

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Jul 16, 2014 8:40 am

Inspirational stuff Hey Heather :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:



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Re: Homwwork 16/7/2014

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Jul 16, 2014 8:48 am

Very inspirational - he's lucky she didn't chop him down for his descriptive turn of phrase about her :lol: :lol:

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Re: Homwwork 16/7/2014

Post by Ron » Wed Jul 16, 2014 9:19 am

Good laugh there Bob, :lol:
The second stanza came across with all the subtlety of the axe!! :o :lol:

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Re: Homwwork 16/7/2014

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Jul 16, 2014 4:17 pm

Reminds me of something on the Chinese café menu; a little dish of sweet and sour. :roll: :)
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