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Stephen Whiteside
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Sometimes

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Fri Oct 10, 2014 3:49 pm

Sometimes I think it's too early.
Sometimes I think it's too late.
Sometimes I think it's pathetic.
Sometimes I think it is great.

Sometimes I think it is square.
Sometimes I think it is round.
Sometimes I'm sure it is lost.
Sometimes I find it is found.

Sometimes it looks cobalt blue.
Others it's all rosy red.
Sometimes it's beating with life.
Others it's pallid and dead.

Sometimes it's fluffy and warm.
Others it's solid and cold.
Sometimes it's cringing with fear.
Others it's brash and it's bold.

Sometimes it's very familiar.
Others it's foreign and strange.
Sometimes it's here in this valley.
Others it's over the range.

Sometimes it looks too expensive.
Others it feels within reach.
Sometimes it's out in deep water.
Others it's left on the beach.

Sometimes I know what I'm doing.
Others I haven't a clue.
Sometimes it's all about me,
But now, I am thinking of you...
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Dave Smith
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Re: Sometimes

Post by Dave Smith » Fri Oct 10, 2014 4:06 pm

Yeah Stephen true, but mostly I'm just confused.

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Re: Sometimes

Post by Neville Briggs » Fri Oct 10, 2014 5:01 pm

:lol: As Bill Clinton said " It all depends what the meaning of is is "
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Re: Sometimes

Post by Heather » Fri Oct 10, 2014 5:55 pm

Sounds like the mind of a woman Stephen :)

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Re: Sometimes

Post by Bob Pacey » Fri Oct 10, 2014 9:24 pm

I just wonder why you did not continue with the Sometimes instead of going to others Stephen



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Re: Sometimes

Post by Stephen Whiteside » Sun Oct 12, 2014 10:20 pm

Yes, I was wondering that too, Bob. I read it back and saw the inconsistency. I was too tired or busy at the time to go back and revise. No good reason that I can think of. It just came out that way.
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Re: Sometimes

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Oct 13, 2014 7:29 am

Only sometimes Dave !

Was just wondering Stephen .

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Re: Sometimes

Post by Bob Pacey » Mon Oct 13, 2014 7:29 am

Not in this lifetime Heather will a man ever understand the workings of a womans mind.



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