the women'll come
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Re: the women'll come
WOW - Impressive- I really like this. Nice writing - Very nice indeed Matt
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Re: the women'll come
'Onya Matt, It's a sad cycle that's been repeated far to many myriad times throughout history.
You have captured it brilliantly mate!
Ron
You have captured it brilliantly mate!
Ron
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Re: the women'll come
I loved reading that Matt. In fact I enjoyed reading it several times. The tragedy of it. Will we ever see a time when the fighting's done?
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Re: the women'll come
That's it Matt, you've got the song to the right tune; the slow march to the beat of the muffled drums.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
Re: the women'll come
I can see those women and children - it's an age-old agony.
thanks for sharing Matt.
Heather
thanks for sharing Matt.
Heather

Re: the women'll come
Brilliant writing Matt, as always. Not much more to say just - Brilliant ...
Re: the women'll come
Women are strong Matt - I've seen it too - women are resilient. Thanks for reminding me.... 

Re: the women'll come
My initial thought was "Wow . . Matt's had a crack at a poem about the Boxing Day sales."
But then after reading it I just thought "Wow."
Onya mate.
Marty

But then after reading it I just thought "Wow."
Onya mate.
Marty