Dance Me Slowly

[Heather]

[David Campbell]

Very nice, Heather, especially that final line. Go well to music.

Cheers
David

[Heather]

Aah, now I know where it's come from - I've been influenced by the music I've been listening to I think. I had the sound of it in my head and one line and then had to find the words for the rest. Funny how the subconscious works.

Thanks David,

Heather

[Maureen K Clifford]

Totally

[Heather]

I'd just like to point out that this poem is not R rated. If it were, I wouldn't be sharing it here!

Twenty years on it would probably start like so:

You beside me
quit your snoring;
did you make that awful smell?


There, did I spoil the mood?

[alongtimegone]

A little, but then I went back and reread the original and now it's all ok again. Beautiful lyric Heather.
Wazza

[Heather]

Thankyou Warren. The line that originally popped into my head had "dreams" in it and unfortunately, dreams does not have very many rhymes and it was a struggle to get one to work in this poem but I was determined to keep that last line.

Heather

[Jeff Thorpe]

A lovely little poem Heather. You're on a roll starting 2015 with a bang.

Regards Jeff

[Heather]

Thankyou Jeff, so glad you liked it. That's one poem up on last year's tally already so that's a start.

Heather

[Catherine Lee]

Lovely Heather - sounds a little like the lyrics of Leonard Cohen again (Dance me to the end of Love) - is that what you mean? As for the 'twenty years on' bit...oh dear, how sad but true! Something's going on with my icons, but I'm certainly laughing - ha!