homework w/e 9/2

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Neville Briggs
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homework w/e 9/2

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Jan 26, 2015 5:58 pm

The Rat.

You rat !
You've wrecked my car,
And broke my good guitar.
From now, your face will have a scar,
Take that !!
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.

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Maureen K Clifford
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Re: homework w/e 9/2

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Jan 26, 2015 9:00 pm

I do hope this is a figment of your imagination and that your car is unmarked Neville :shock: :? Good on you - you captured the muse :lol: Nicely done
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