Homework 9/2/15

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Homework 9/2/15

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Jan 27, 2015 12:39 pm

Blood worms
are fun to dig
mud from top bottom
mosey down to the whiting banks
got’em.
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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Jan 27, 2015 12:47 pm

They weren't quite that big. :lol:

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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by vwalla » Tue Jan 27, 2015 12:56 pm

Made me very envious!! :mrgreen:
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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Jan 27, 2015 12:57 pm

You're going to have to have a lesson in resizing photos Wazza ;)
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Better check your cinquain again I think you left a word out of line three.
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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Jan 27, 2015 1:27 pm

You did leave a word out - I saw it too (to) :lol: At least you have the evidence to back up your words Wazza - pictures used on this site need to be reduced to 600 pxls or less on your computer before posting. Great catch though - bet that was a feed and a half, fish no 4 looks a tad surprised. Well done on the cinquain poem as well - you did good :D
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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Jan 27, 2015 3:10 pm

Resize it again Nev still to big.


I can see the movie The Attack of The Monster Whiting ?


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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by Neville Briggs » Tue Jan 27, 2015 6:31 pm

Where's your cinquain Bob. ;)
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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by alongtimegone » Tue Jan 27, 2015 6:34 pm

Hi folks I do have a pic resizer but forgot to use it and then could not manage to edit and or delete. :oops: Funny, maybe not, how you can read a line numerous times and still miss the error. Bugger! is that a fail? They were big whiting. My best effort for a while.
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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Jan 27, 2015 6:43 pm

on the bottom of my head Neville ?

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Re: Homework 9/2/15

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Tue Jan 27, 2015 7:04 pm

no fails here Wazza ever :D
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