Welcome to the burbs.

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Heather

Welcome to the burbs.

Post by Heather » Tue Jan 27, 2015 4:57 pm

Thanks to the friend who inspired it...... :)


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Cropduster
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Re: Welcome to the burbs.

Post by Cropduster » Tue Jan 27, 2015 5:20 pm

Hello neighbour

You obviously live in the same suburb as me :D

Allan

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Re: Welcome to the burbs.

Post by Ron » Wed Jan 28, 2015 8:03 am

Do I detect an impending sale Heather, ;) or was that the friend! :)

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Ron

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Re: Welcome to the burbs.

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Jan 28, 2015 8:09 am

Don't do it H you will regret it .


I still long for my little 3 acre block.


and my golf has gone down hill as well. the guy two blocks over used to let me belt balls his way and would drop them back on his daily walk.

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Re: Welcome to the burbs.

Post by Neville Briggs » Wed Jan 28, 2015 9:35 am

Good poem Heather. It's about the real Australia.

Don't tell anyone else but I like the way you have underdone the rhymes. ;)
Neville
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Heather

Re: Welcome to the burbs.

Post by Heather » Wed Jan 28, 2015 10:26 am

This poem was written after spending one very restless night in a suburban area of a country town - with nearly every of those noises experienced (and others on other occasions). It's going to take a lot of adjusting moving from my peaceful 40 acres to within earshot of other people. My friend said to me, "Welcome to the burbs" - and so an idea was born.

Thanks Allan, Ron and Bob.

Neville I prefer understated rhymes on most occasions - as you have probably realised by now.

Heather :)

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