THE LAST BREATH

Post by **Heather** » Mon May 11, 2015 4:05 pm

It's taken you a long time to write that one Trish, but I knew it would come out eventually. There's a lot of love and pain in that little poem. Hugs xxx

Heather

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Mon May 11, 2015 5:05 pm

Delicately handled Trish - well done - the sadness is tangible but you've done a good job with the write.

Post by **Trisha Patterson** » Mon May 11, 2015 6:49 pm

Thanks Heather and Maureen,
Poetry writing can be quite cathartic...if you let it!
Trish

Post by **Heather** » Mon May 11, 2015 7:06 pm

When you get off the mower!

Catherine Lee · Post by **Catherine Lee** » Mon May 11, 2015 9:52 pm

Totally agree with Heather and Maureen - the sadness is indeed tangible. A dear friend of mine in England lost her fiancee unexpectedly last week while waiting for further test results, and this poem is uncannily similar to the feelings expressed in her email letting everyone know. A very touching poem indeed Trisha.

Post by **Trisha Patterson** » Tue May 12, 2015 11:57 am

Heather, you'll be pleased to hear that the mower is resting peacefully in the shed...for now!!!

Thanks Catherine and sorry to hear of your friend's sad loss.

Trish

ABPA - Australian Bush Poets Association

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