THE OLD DANCE HALL

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THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Terry » Wed Aug 26, 2015 2:07 pm

It was after reading Ross’s recent poem about the good old days, that I remembered this.

How many of you remember the old out of town, or Bush Dances.

As a young bloke I grew up mostly in Albany; a town in those days of several thousand.
There were several outlying halls that had once been part of a small town, but apart from the odd farm house the old halls were all that was left.
Not everybody had cars back then, so there was a bus to take us to and from the Friday or Saturday night dances, and not only young people went to them, I might add.

Everybody would dress up in their best gear with many of us looking for romance.
Although I was away a lot from the age of about 17/18, whenever I was back in town, it was off to the dances.
It was during a break from Coober Pedy (after being away for years) that I met my wife Valma at one of those dances – they were great times.

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The Old Dance Hall

Where the cattle are seen grazing on the lush feed growing tall
and the gravel track is winding on towards the old bush hall.
There’s a whiff of eucalyptus in the air along the way,
as my thoughts’ now shuffle down the path, of memory today.

I can hear once more the music as I heard it long ago;
see the old hall bathed in moonlight, while inside a golden glow.
Through the open doorway dancers glide across the old halls floor
and the years now melt away to happy youthful days before.

Through the misty haze of time, again I look around the hall,
seeing women in their finery on chairs along the wall.
While the men dressed in their Sunday best and looking for romance,
try to somehow find the courage here to ask a girl to dance.

Sweet now is the music as it drifts throughout the crowded hall
and the swaying dancers move as one there at the old Bush Ball.
Anxiously I’m searching hoping for a glimpse of her again,
for she must be here somewhere, although so far I’ve looked in vain.

Then among the sea of faces I can see her there once more,
it was in the ‘Pride of Erin,’ changing partners like before.
Then there comes that magic moment when at last she reaches me;
once again that special smile of hers I’ve waited long to see.

Time stands still a moment while I try to think of words to say;
inspirations lacking, and my mind is blank again today.
Precious moments pass by quickly as the dance moves ever on,
time to barely say hello, a brush of hands, and she was gone.

*****

© T.E. Piggott
Last edited by Terry on Thu Aug 27, 2015 2:23 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Wed Aug 26, 2015 3:18 pm

What a wonderful picture your words paint Terry - I see it clearly in this poem. Nicely done.
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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Catherine Lee » Wed Aug 26, 2015 5:46 pm

Beautiful Terry, and such a vivid picture....And oh, how I wish there would be more of this type of dancing still going on today! Really enjoyed this lovely poem.

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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Bob Pacey » Wed Aug 26, 2015 7:34 pm

The Pride of Erin the only way a shy young bloke like me got to meet shielas

well done Terry some good memories relived.

Bob

Psssssst wanna dance Cath ?
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!

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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Terry » Wed Aug 26, 2015 8:31 pm

Thanks Maureen & Catherine - I'm pleased you both enjoyed it.

G/day Bob

Yes the old Pride of Erin, even if you couldn't dance well you always made an extra effort to be in that one.
You'd try to pick someone who's toes you hadn't trodden for a while, and then watch the girls scatter like a receding tide - Ah great memories mate

Cheers Terry

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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Terry » Thu Aug 27, 2015 2:25 pm

Just corrected a silly mistake SMILE'S should have been Smile - changed the line but forgot to alter that.

Terry

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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Catherine Lee » Thu Aug 27, 2015 5:32 pm

Pssst....Any time Bob! :)

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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Shelley Hansen » Thu Aug 27, 2015 5:43 pm

Lovely, Terry!

I just had a thought - how would kids today be dancing the Pride of Erin and texting on their mobiles at the same time?? Would be a few more toes trodden on, I suspect :lol:

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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Heather » Thu Aug 27, 2015 9:09 pm

Beautiful Terry. That made me smile and feel all gooey inside.

Heather :)

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Re: THE OLD DANCE HALL

Post by Terry » Thu Aug 27, 2015 11:22 pm

Thanks Shelley & Heather.

Deep down we're all bits of softies aren't we.

Most of us still have some fond memories, of what to us were happy times.

Cheers Terry

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