Confessions of a Fundamentalist
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Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Confessions of a Fundamentalist
I am a true believer;
Of doctrinal purity.
What is, is right
What's not, is wrong;
And that's what ought to be.
I'm blessed and don't resemble those
Who puddle in the mud
Where they delight
In putrid pong
To fire their foetid blood.
Yes ! I've been loyal and steadfast,
Never swerving left or right.
I mark the line;
Define the grade;
A beacon burning bright.
With all my gathered wisdom
I persist till victory's won.
The prize is mine;
The accolade
From those who say— well done !
I am a true believer;
Of doctrinal purity.
What is, is right
What's not, is wrong;
And that's what ought to be.
I'm blessed and don't resemble those
Who puddle in the mud
Where they delight
In putrid pong
To fire their foetid blood.
Yes ! I've been loyal and steadfast,
Never swerving left or right.
I mark the line;
Define the grade;
A beacon burning bright.
With all my gathered wisdom
I persist till victory's won.
The prize is mine;
The accolade
From those who say— well done !
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Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Now it's your turn Heather.
Thanks Matt. I think we all have a line to hold Matt, the question is why do we do it.


Thanks Matt. I think we all have a line to hold Matt, the question is why do we do it.

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Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Very strong poem Neville - "well done!" 

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Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
G/day Neville
I agree well done.
I'm not sure just what line I'm supposed to hold.
Cheers
Terry
I agree well done.
I'm not sure just what line I'm supposed to hold.
Cheers
Terry
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Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Well done Neville
Steadfast and true
Allan
Steadfast and true

Allan
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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
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Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Thanks Catherine, hopefully I have succeeded in one of my aims which was to use direct speech.
Thanks Terry. I don't see you in there
Thanks Alan.
Maureen, who said it was autobiographical.
Is that me, oowah I'm undone 
Thanks Terry. I don't see you in there


Thanks Alan.
Maureen, who said it was autobiographical.


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" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
Once I've finished mucking about with other people's words, then I might have time to think about my own thoughts and words, Neville. 

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Re: Confessions of a Fundamentalist
I reckon we are always thinking about our own thoughts and words. Write 'em down in a little notebook in no particular order, eventually we get a pile of " raw material" to build with once we have time to sift through the pile.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.