INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

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Vic Jefferies
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INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by Vic Jefferies » Mon Sep 05, 2011 10:37 am

INCREDIBLE EDIBLES.

A little fish went swimming
in the deep green sea
where he met a larger fish -
who ate him for his tea!

The larger fish went swimming
gaily on a wave
till he met up with a shark -
and you know how sharks behave.

The shark he went a swimming
fearing none at all
till he ran into a trawler -
and the trawler won the brawl.

The trawler went a sailing
on the ocean blue
till it met a whale -
and you know what whales can do.

The whale went a swimming
all happy and at ease
till he met a little man -
who alas was Japanese!

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Heather

Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by Heather » Mon Sep 05, 2011 11:58 am

Oh Vic that is fantastic! Laughed! Thanks for that.

Heather :)
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Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by Maureen K Clifford » Mon Sep 05, 2011 2:36 pm

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: something a bit fishy about this I reckon :lol: :lol: :lol:
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william williams

Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by william williams » Mon Sep 05, 2011 3:06 pm

But VIC that little Japan fella said he was only doing research
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Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by Neville Briggs » Mon Sep 05, 2011 3:12 pm

Good one Vic . :lol:
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Vic Jefferies
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Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by Vic Jefferies » Tue Sep 06, 2011 4:10 pm

Just finished thanking everyone but it seems to have got lost, so thank you Heather, Maureen, William and Neville. Just a bit of fun!
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Bob Pacey
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Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by Bob Pacey » Tue Sep 06, 2011 6:20 pm

I was waiting for the full circle Vic ??????



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Dave Smith
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Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by Dave Smith » Tue Sep 06, 2011 7:01 pm

Good one Vic, did ya all notice that every one of them ate raw fish.

I love it.

TTFN 8-)
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Vic Jefferies
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Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by Vic Jefferies » Wed Sep 07, 2011 3:13 pm

There is a very funny joke about the full circle Bob, but I can't tell it here!
Thanks Dave glad you enjoyed the poem.

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Re: INCREDIBLE EDIBLES

Post by David J Delaney » Wed Sep 07, 2011 9:08 pm

Very good Vic, got a good giggle mate. :lol: :lol:
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