Water, Earth, Wind and Fire

[DinkyDi]

Bob! I do nothing in the simpler form mate. But I do take my time

[DinkyDi]

listening to Garth Brooks.

So Yeah Thanks

[DinkyDi]

But I am Pretty pissed!

Listening to Face To Face by Garth

[DinkyDi]

I think I needed that in the first few lines to carry the grammer on. However the fith line is different

[DinkyDi]

Good call Bob, actually that's the part I'm still working on.

But "The plot" is "Water"

I'm sure I will get the last 8 lines to gel, actually the first 3 are there, just need to work on the the last 5.

[Bob Pacey]

No probs mate, Just suggestions you use or disgard as you will even if it gets the juices flowing it helps.



Cheers Bob

[DinkyDi]

O.K. I finished the rewrite of the last few lines. And am a lot happier with it now