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DollyDot · Post by **DollyDot** » Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:22 pm

I'm not sure about this but here goes!
There once was a lassie named Sal
Who saw that her middle did swell.
Her mother found out
And gave her a clout
Sal thought that her life would be hell!

But Tim from next door made a claim
He knew that he was same
He gave her a ring
They wed in the Spring
And now have to pick out a name!

And after their girl came at last
They made a decision real fast
And called her Leanne
The name of the Gran
And now all the shame’s in the past!

Jack & Jill

There once was a fellow named Bill
Who loved to climb up the hill
Was taken aback
When he saw that Jack
Was kissing his lassie sweet Jill.

Help needed!

Cheers

Dolly

Maureen K Clifford · Post by **Maureen K Clifford** » Sun Mar 11, 2012 6:33 pm

I don't think you need any help Dolly - they look really good. Was it some other kind of help you needed perhaps, changing a tyre, fixing a washer

Robyn · Post by **Robyn** » Sun Mar 11, 2012 7:42 pm

Well done Dot!
Robyn

DollyDot · Post by **DollyDot** » Sun Mar 11, 2012 8:39 pm

Thank-you Maureen and Robyn. You are too kind!

Bob Pacey · Post by **Bob Pacey** » Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:34 pm

They are being genuine Dot it is when they say "thank you for shareing "

That you should get concerned.

Not a lover of limericks but well done.

Bob

Post by **Heather** » Mon Mar 12, 2012 11:35 am

Well I do love limericks and I think you did a great job Dot. I laughed. Keep them coming!

Heather

Neville Briggs · Post by **Neville Briggs** » Mon Mar 12, 2012 2:11 pm

Well done Dot

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