MOI POEM - homework w/e 02/04/12
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MOI POEM - homework w/e 02/04/12
MOI POEM
Might I just remind you
And that’s every lad and lassie.
Useless here to whinge and moan or
Rant – I find that passé.
Even if you think you can’t - you won’t know till you try.
Everyone can have a go
Now spread your wings and fly.
Can you say in honesty that you don’t know how?
Look up your Funk and Wagnall’s and there you have it. WOW.
Information guaranteed to set you on your way
Free of charge to everyone – so get writing today.
Fancy nancy you can do
Or if you’d rather not,
Rhyme the words – get in the swing and
Dance, and lose the plot, but make sure that you………………………
© all ‘fore someone steals the lot.
Might I just remind you
And that’s every lad and lassie.
Useless here to whinge and moan or
Rant – I find that passé.
Even if you think you can’t - you won’t know till you try.
Everyone can have a go
Now spread your wings and fly.
Can you say in honesty that you don’t know how?
Look up your Funk and Wagnall’s and there you have it. WOW.
Information guaranteed to set you on your way
Free of charge to everyone – so get writing today.
Fancy nancy you can do
Or if you’d rather not,
Rhyme the words – get in the swing and
Dance, and lose the plot, but make sure that you………………………
© all ‘fore someone steals the lot.
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Re: MOI POEM - homework w/e 02/04/12


Sorry Maureen I have to whinge and moan, I've given it some thought but it just won't speak to me yet.
Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
Re: MOI POEM - homework w/e 02/04/12
Funk and Wagnall’s ??????? ... Are they Tasmanian??
AND passé (passAY) with Lassi???
Oh Mausie, I think you'd better lay off the lemon essence ...

AND passé (passAY) with Lassi???
Oh Mausie, I think you'd better lay off the lemon essence ...


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Re: MOI POEM - homework w/e 02/04/12
Poetic Licence - try it with a Scots accent - give me a break
Lemon essence - Maaaaate!!!! Baileys or Butterscotch Schnapps or I'll be buggered - Alliteration and assonance

Lemon essence - Maaaaate!!!! Baileys or Butterscotch Schnapps or I'll be buggered - Alliteration and assonance


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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
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Re: MOI POEM - homework w/e 02/04/12
Neville
Now don’t you give up
Even though you may want to
Verily I exhort you to try.
I know that you can
Lets give it a shot
Look outside the square with your
Eye


Now don’t you give up
Even though you may want to
Verily I exhort you to try.
I know that you can
Lets give it a shot
Look outside the square with your
Eye





Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
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Re: MOI POEM - homework w/e 02/04/12




By the way. I have no problem with your rhyming. Like Robin Williams says in Dead Poets' Society " We're doing poetry, not laying pipe "


Neville
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
" Prose is description, poetry is presence " Les Murray.
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Re: MOI POEM - homework w/e 02/04/12
That's lucky Neville - I don't know how to lay pipe



Check out The Scribbly Bark Poets blog site here -
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
http://scribblybarkpoetry.blogspot.com.au/
I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.