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[DinkyDi]

Really I'm not sure why I wrote this but it's honest and I've come to believe honesty is what matters.

Maybe this will carry on to something else; mostly likely it won't but who knows?


Driven by expulsion
From life left unperturbed?
Completed; less; compulsion
Now stalls a storied world.
I never really rendered
My hope to find a way,
Bleatingly surrendered
Callously remade....
15/04/12 Ado

I told you guys I'm not a bush poet by the rules!
But my works rhyme and with meter; I can't help it if I delve a little deeper.

[Maureen K Clifford]

Good to see you back here Adam - its been along time between drinks

Its good - probably one of those ones that you put in your kick and then later you think to yourself -aaah that's where it goes. Having said that it' still a nice little profound statement all on its own - not sure why but to me it is pointing towards the re surfacing of the thylacine - Tassie Tiger. There was talk that they had sufficient dna to clone the species .

Cheers

Maureen

[Zondrae]

Welcome back Adam,

Why do you leave it so long between 'hits'? Now I'll go and read it again.

[DinkyDi]

G'day Zondrae, honestly I've just lost the enthusiasm to write. Lacking inspiration or a muse or something I guess.

[DinkyDi]

However with that said. I've just finished another. So maybe I've found it again I don't know.

[Neville Briggs]

Adam. I know what you mean about lacking enthusiasm, I get the same.

This is just guesswork on my part, but I wonder if reading is the antidote to inspirational doldrums.

I'll make a suggestion, read Dylan Thomas's poem Fern Hill ( it's on the web ) or his other one Do Not Go Gently Into That Good Night, see if they spark anything in your poetic soul. They should .

[DinkyDi]

Exactly Marty, most of my inspiration comes from the music I listen to. I haven't bought anything new lately, so that's probably the reason. But when I do get some new tunes no doubt the pen will move again.

Till then I just enjoy the ones I have