once ago

[Neville Briggs]

Good one Matt. The line breaks are in just the right place for the mood.
I've been told that is essential for good poetry.

You shouldn't be writing like this yet, you're still young.

[Dave Smith]

Hey Matt are you talking about me, that’s a fair description.

A well presented verse. Goodonya.

TTFN

[Heather]

He may be young (ish), but he's been here before I reckon Neville and learnt a thing or two. Is that cheating do ya reckon?

I like it Matt.

Heather

[warooa]

I dunno where he's been Heather, but wherever it is he's taken it all in.

They're few and far between, Matt but well worth waiting for.

Cheers, Marty

[Glenny Palmer]

.........I'm never gunna give you cheek Matty...........look out!

........

[Terry]

Never mind the Ferrari Matt,
a Troopie might suit you better Mate.

Terry

[Neville Briggs]

I wonder how many bush poets would recognise the quality of sprawl when you cut down your ferrari to a bush basher.