Had to cheat a bit Maureen "round' in stead of "around "
The Unwelcome Visitor
Hi-welcome to my humble home, it's great to have you dear
I'll go and put the kettle on and then collect your gear
and then I'll do the dirty work but don't you worry none
the daily schedule must be kept-but you relax, have fun.
Please make yourself at home my friend, the sofas calling you
just fall into its clutches while I make another brew
you don't have to lift a finger-relax, enjoy, unwind
I'll carry on and do the chores, you know-the normal grind.
What's that? you have a housemaid, well now, pray my friend-do say
how is it that your tired and worn when you do nought all day?
you sit there while she scurries 'round and serves you tea and cake
this house work capers not for you-your nails might chip and break!!
Well friend, I have some news for you, this housemaids had enough
no longer will I pamper you with tea and cake and stuff
Your holiday is on delay-start packing, leave and then
find someone else to pamper you and don't come back again
Homework Week Ending 22/7/13 The Unwanted Visitor
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Homework Week Ending 22/7/13 The Unwanted Visitor
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.
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I may not always succeed in making a difference, but I will go to my grave knowing I at least tried.
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Thanks
Sue
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.
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Nice Sue hey why don't you just change scurries to runs and then use around ?
Bob
Bob
The purpose in life is to have fun.
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
After you grasp that everything else seems insignificant !!!
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Re: Homework Week Ending 22/7/13 The Unwanted Visitor
The prompt is "scurries around" Bob-I do try to stick to the prompts.
Hey how's it all going with you?, looks like your busy.
Sue
Hey how's it all going with you?, looks like your busy.
Sue
the door is always open, the kettles always on, my shoulders here to cry on, i'll not judge who's right or wrong.
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Paints a lovely picture Sue, and in so few words. Well done!
Robyn Sykes, the Binalong Bard.