Scratching at the Seams

[Hully]

This poem accompanies Peter Mayfield's interview for On The Road - its a bit jumbled as a stand alone poem and is designed to stitch together his own narrative...here 'tis anyway

When you’re eyes see horizons and your feet itch to move
With nothing in you’re pocket and nothing left to prove
With a heart full of hoping that will not go away
And no other way of knowing because it’s always been that way
It is time to take that road no matter where it goes
And see what the road shows you, no matter what it shows
Seeking out the lonely spots and honing in on dreams
Sifting through the sands of time, and scratching at the seams

Strip away the surplus stuff that occupies your space
Trim down to requirements for any time and place
Distill that to the essence of what you need to do
You will learn that wants are many, but needs are very few
make your plans accordingly, prepared to sacrifice
The pleasures of the easy road, the occasional vice
Setting up your journey for the pay-off that redeems
Sifting through the sands of time, and scratching at the seams

We all get to walk upon the earth for a short time
We may find each other’s wanderings as simple or sublime
We only learn what has been learnt and uncover few new facts
Each of us making our own mark upon some well worn tracks
We inform each other’s journeys in the stories that are told
Looking out for anything but holding out for gold
Especially the parts that start to show at the extremes
Sifting through the sands of time, and scratching at the seams

The footprints of our tiny lives will slowly fade away
Leaving traces for the ones who’ll come to search another day
We all return at some time, wherever we may roam
It’s the memory that we share with other hearts that calls us home
Though the road will offer brief respite, and its own brand of care
For there’s a different kind of treasure in the stories people share
But its not the gold that glitters, it’s the solitude that gleams
Sifting through the sands of time, and scratching at the seams

The produced audio can be heard here. http://hullyjoe.com/andrew-hull/projects/on-the-road/


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[Maureen K Clifford]

Fabulous and I love the collection - I bought a Kia but Bob P. bought a Jeep

[alongtimegone]

I checked out the link Maureen. Very good. Thanks for posting.
Wazza

[Heather]

Oh yeah! Lots I can relate to in that poem Andrew.

Much enjoyed it.

Heather

[Glenny Palmer]

.....always good!.......many thanks Hully.

[David Campbell]

Interesting and very thought-provoking, Andrew.

David

[Catherine Lee]

Lovely poem Hully - thank you!

[manfredvijars]

You're very giving Hully, sharing insights into how you derived those pieces ... Thank you ...

[Hully]

Thanks all,
I will post some more. As far as method, the process is to do the interview - typically about 30-40 mins of raw audio - and then edit that down to 4 or 5 'themes' (usually try to follow a format:Intro, How you travel, a typical day, stories from the road, insights, etc) - so when I have the interview edited into 'blocks' I try to write something that links the blocks together - so typically it 'casts back' over what has just been said, and 'casts forward' into what is coming up....then add a few insights of my own and hey presto !

It means that they don't always flow perfectly as written pieces, but make better sense in the context they are presented in.

Anyway, thanks again - I have really enjoyed this project.

Have a Merry Christmas.

h