W/e 30/11/2015 - If you listen Carefully

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W/e 30/11/2015 - If you listen Carefully

Post by Terry » Fri Nov 27, 2015 11:35 pm

If You Listen Carefully

Have you ever listened carefully when all is hushed around;
have you heard the sound of silence, when there is no other sound?
As you sit around your campfire - not a single thing has stirred -
not a living thing is moving, not the slightest noise is heard?

Special are these moments in our ever over-crowded world;
you must treasure every minute as this magic is unfurled.
And these moments will stay with you for as long as you may live;
you have shared the secret, and have sensed the pleasure it can give.

© T.E Piggott

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Post by william williams » Sat Nov 28, 2015 9:55 am

That special time in the bush..

Oh and by the way I have had the privilege of seeing TERRY'S book fantastic Mate and to all you others it is well worth it


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Post by Maureen K Clifford » Sat Nov 28, 2015 10:39 am

Nice one Terry - a moment of stillness and serenity in a frantic world. It sounds so appealing
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Re: W/e 30/11/2015 - If you listen Carefully

Post by Terry » Sat Nov 28, 2015 10:44 pm

Thanks Bill & Maureen
I've been a bit slack of late - busy with other things.
So thought it was time post something.

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Post by Shelley Hansen » Mon Nov 30, 2015 4:03 pm

Nice one Terry - a reminder that the best things in life are free!

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Re: W/e 30/11/2015 - If you listen Carefully

Post by Terry » Mon Nov 30, 2015 6:36 pm

Thanks Shelley

A bit of a puny effort this one,
hope to have a bit more time for the next one.

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Post by Catherine Lee » Thu Dec 03, 2015 3:50 pm

Definitely not puny Terry - a lovely poem that brings us all a moment of silence and thoughtfulness as we read it.

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Post by Heather » Sat Dec 05, 2015 10:03 pm

Lovely Terry. I've had those moments and you took me to the campfire and the peaceful night sky. I recall stopping on a trip from Licola to Jamieson in the middle of the bush and there was absolute silence - not even a bird. There's not many places you can hear that.

Heather :)

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Post by Terry » Sun Dec 06, 2015 10:47 pm

Thanks Heather

You're right, I've been lucky and have experienced it a few times in very remote places.
But even out there it's rare, there nearly always seems to be something; like a bird singing or a kangaroo hopping,
and when all else is quiet, any noise seems magnified.
It's hard to really explain adequately just how special those moments can be.

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Post by alongtimegone » Sat Dec 12, 2015 11:00 am

That's just great Terry and like your last line, it gave me much pleasure.
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